The Infinite Haiku

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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Gullivor » Sat Apr 18, 2009 7:22 pm

collect some for home
pebbles placed in my pockets
my pants have fell down
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Sideways » Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:54 pm

Gullivor wrote:collect some for home
pebbles placed in my pockets
my pants have fell down
my pants have fell down
and now they must be ironed
my balls have fell down
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by anneporter » Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:29 pm

my balls have fell down
face sags as arches collapse:
a vintage human
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by anneporter » Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:30 pm

a vintage human
free from the moon's tidal sway
blurring, softening...
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by piñata heart » Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:43 pm

blurring, softening...
i wish i could remember
kissing you that night
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Violet » Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:08 pm

kissing you that night
well do I remember it
deep here do I dwell...
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Marisha » Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:18 pm

Violet wrote:kissing you that night
well do I remember it
deep here do I dwell...
"deep here do I dwell"
language here do you mangle
so not are you well?
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Violet » Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:33 pm

... it hasn't occurred to me yet that that's such a bad line, but I'll take your word for it (!)... carry on... (someone more inspired I hope than I am at the moment)... v.

... oh god... it's now occurring to me just how crappy that line is...
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Marisha » Mon Apr 20, 2009 10:53 pm

Violet wrote:kissing you that night
well do I remember it
deep here do I dwell...
deep here do I dwell
you know sex with you is hell,
oooh, just watch it swell
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by tinderella » Mon Apr 20, 2009 11:11 pm

oooh just watch it swell
your head, from all my nice words
I better be mean
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Marisha » Mon Apr 20, 2009 11:19 pm

tinderella wrote:oooh just watch it swell
your head, from all my nice words
I better be mean
I better be mean
and you had better be you
down on your knees, Girl
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by anneporter » Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:24 pm

down on your knees, Girl
don't matter how you worship
the dawn-lit delta
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by tinderella » Tue Apr 21, 2009 6:07 pm

the dawn-lit delta
brings us to the omega
the night closes in
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Marisha » Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:22 pm

tinderella wrote:the dawn-lit delta
brings us to the omega
the night closes in


the night closes in
only a few minutes time
so drink your blood now
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Re: The Infinite Haiku

Post by Violet » Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:30 pm

so drink your blood now
'tis but the dawn that baits us
let's fly to great heights
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