Please tell me what you think of my Seaside Song!!

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Please tell me what you think of my Seaside Song!!

Post by Songman » Tue Feb 13, 2007 3:17 pm

Please tell me what you think of my sea song!
You can hear it for free at http://www.overplay.co.uk/band.asp?band_id=1002233
Please feel free to give it a rating too as it's been put in the Overplay song competition.And like I've said to many people before.If you give it a good rating and i make it big,i'll buy you all a drink!!
Cheers!
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Post by Makera » Tue Feb 13, 2007 3:46 pm

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Hmm, this was an afterthought, huh.. how many more got hit with this by PM I wonder.

Rating? try the rough end of a pineapple :lol:
BoHo

Post by BoHo » Tue Feb 13, 2007 3:53 pm

Makera wrote:Image

Hmm, this was an afterthought, huh.. how many more got hit with this by PM I wonder.

Rating? try the rough end of a pineapple :lol:
Spppppplaatttterrrrr!!1!

LMAO! Good call, Makera; and, you're fast on the drawing of the line. I salute you and agree with your rating, even though I didn't read the PM and won't listen to the song; after all, if I wanted to hear from an arsehole, I'd fart!

Dregma, dullicious dragma, S/M.

Makera, I hope your day is half as divine as you've made mine.

BoHo
p.s. Didn't even open it; thought it was da troll/op . . .
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THE ITEM THAT HE SENT HER:
http://www.judithfitzgerald.ca/leonardcohen.html
ADAGIOS III — ELECTRA'S BENISON, BOUND!
http://www.oberonpress.ca/titles.pl?v=new
JUDITH FITZGERALD'S EVER-EVOLVING WRITESITE:
http://www.judithfitzgerald.ca/
LEONARD COHEN'S OPEN BOOK OF LONGING:
http://tinyurl.com/yno7z7
POET PARLIAMENTAEIRIAL JUDITH FITZGERALD:
http://tinyurl.com/38ssjq
THE AMERICAN BOOK REVIEW:
http://tinyurl.com/2h6op6
SUNITI NAMJOSHI'S BRIGHTSITE:
http://tinyurl.com/37jjvy
J.F. ON AL PURDY & ELI MANDEL @ CBC:
http://tinyurl.com/2vdrdq
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Post by lizzytysh » Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:04 pm

Well, I got 2 [identicals] in my PM box [if that's of any use in your assessment :wink: ]... and if anyone's been here any length of time at all, they know I have no sound :roll: ... and I don't need a drink nor, according to your posting, Makera, to do a false rating. Better left alone.

Is there a way to click a box and PM the entire membership? Cuz this one's going way back, eh, Makera :wink: ? How you been :D ? Other than scrrraaaatchy, from that pineapple.


~ Lizzy
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Post by tomsakic » Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:12 pm

I have to ask members, old or new, that they do not send chain PMs or emails to all members of the board, please.


Also, this thread will be moved in Poetry and Music by the Forum Members.
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Post by Makera » Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:17 pm

Hi Lizzy & BoHo :lol:

Yeah, I didn't open that link.. but when I checked the profile (no posts yet) I clicked his myspace link to see who/what he was and copped an earful of it there.. Trust me, you didn't miss a thing! ;)
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Post by Paula » Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:32 pm

Well I quite liked it. It had a touch of Suggs about it and if you want people to hear your music you have to tread on a few toes.
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Post by lizzytysh » Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:04 pm

Hi Paula ~

Good to see you here 8) . I'll never know because I won't be going there... however, for me, the point isn't how good it is or isn't, but rather spamming sites like this... coming to promote your own work, without interacting with anyone, getting to know anyone, or with any intention to stay. We're just a billboard where he's hung his playbill. That's always been my objection when someone comes like that... especially on a mass basis like this! There are a lot of various types of artists who are members here... they have links to their sites at the bottom of their PMs or in their Profiles. Everyone knows their reasons and have the option of linking, as do we on this one. The difference on this is that this is his first posting [and likely only] and his sole purpose for coming here. Most everyone here knows where to find myspace and other sites where people post their own music, if that's the kind of thing they're sinking... and to even suggest giving a "High" rating :roll: with a feigned [or even real :roll: ] promise of a drink :roll: ... does he think we're all alcoholics dying for one?

In addition, I don't appreciate having my 'real' PMs pushed off the bottom due to the arrival of two from this one. I try to stay caught up with answering/deleting, but these TWO have just made 2 at the bottom disappear :evil: !


Love you, Paula :D ,
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Post by Makera » Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:37 pm

Yes Lizzy, that's it exactly :D I bust people on Allpoetry for spamming every other day. Glad to see it's not allowed here either ;)

Then, I get a notice of a PM here only to find another one :roll: Well, I dropped my moderator restraints & let him have it .. it felt so good! :lol:

From: Makera
To: Songman
Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:24 am
Subject: Re: Please tell me what you think of my Seaside Song!!

I hope you don't think that joining a site just to spam members without getting to know anyone or post anything is going to be appreciated. Extremely rude, actually.

I'm a moderator on a poetry site and bust people for that self-centred, inconsiderate crap all the time. NO one likes being spammed!

Bad form, mate.

Oh, I clicked on your myspace to see who/what the hell you were and if that's an example of your stuff playing there, erm... don't give up your day job :roll:

So, kindly bugger off :P

Ok, I've played hookey long enough.. back to my 'mod squad' busting spammers, scammers, harassers, plagiarists and the odd pedophile... :)

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Post by lizzytysh » Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:47 pm

Well :lol: ~ great and most accurate response to YOUR 2nd one, Makera :lol: . Good on you. I 'second' it.

Won't even bother correcting my typo on the intended word of "seeking" ~ must be the sea and all... Freudian :wink: .

Congratulations on your own, 'day'/'night' job, on the site where you obviously spend much time :)

What's in that [to me visible only as... ] little box with the tiny, red "x" at the bottom of your own posting, Makera?


~ Lizzy
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Post by Makera » Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:22 pm

Aaw, doesn't my little rose writing 'Have a great day' animation show for you Lizzy? Hmmm, maybe slow connection with the web host.. Perhaps refresh the page.. delete temp files? Dunno otherwise, the link is good :?
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Post by lizzytysh » Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:41 pm

Hi Makera ~

Nope :( . Page refreshed ~ no results. Rose refuses to come out :? . Delete temp files ~ as nice as it would be to see the rose writing... not gonna go that far with it :wink: . I'll trust that it's a pretty one and her penmanship is good, though 8) . Is she your thematically-correct, Valentine's special? [Yes, I know, sexist on a rose is a rose is a rose is a female :wink: ] Does her writing resemble that on my avatar :) ?


~ Lizzy
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Post by BoHo » Tue Feb 13, 2007 9:00 pm

Makera wrote:Ok, I've played hookey long enough.. back to my 'mod squad' busting spammers, scammers, harassers, plagiarists and the odd pedophile... :)
Thanks for the PM heads-up, Makera. I saw your lovely rose line just fine; so, it may be some firewalls are preventing it from being seen. You vent goooood, L! Come back sooner next time, won't you? We need all the *be-for-real* poets we can get. Once I cool my heels a tad, I'll have a peek-see at allpoetry. Can't promise I'll join; but, I sure like your style; in fact, right now, from thumb to thumb, all my doo-wop digits is a-singing by a country smile.

Undeniably, BoHo
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THE ITEM THAT HE SENT HER:
http://www.judithfitzgerald.ca/leonardcohen.html
ADAGIOS III — ELECTRA'S BENISON, BOUND!
http://www.oberonpress.ca/titles.pl?v=new
JUDITH FITZGERALD'S EVER-EVOLVING WRITESITE:
http://www.judithfitzgerald.ca/
LEONARD COHEN'S OPEN BOOK OF LONGING:
http://tinyurl.com/yno7z7
POET PARLIAMENTAEIRIAL JUDITH FITZGERALD:
http://tinyurl.com/38ssjq
THE AMERICAN BOOK REVIEW:
http://tinyurl.com/2h6op6
SUNITI NAMJOSHI'S BRIGHTSITE:
http://tinyurl.com/37jjvy
J.F. ON AL PURDY & ELI MANDEL @ CBC:
http://tinyurl.com/2vdrdq
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Post by jarkko » Tue Feb 13, 2007 9:40 pm

I will cancel Songman's membership if he sends another group PM.
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Post by Tony » Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:07 am

One could understand his action more if this individual had made previous contributions to the forum.
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