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tom.d.stiller
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haiku

Post by tom.d.stiller » Thu Apr 11, 2019 7:48 am

i've lost too many
sue andrew babz and now jo
spring buds only tears
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Re: haiku

Post by LauriefromAlaska » Thu Apr 11, 2019 2:19 pm

We are a future
Memory like those cherished
Friends whose light still shines.
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Re: high-queue

Post by solongleonard » Fri Apr 12, 2019 6:47 pm

hopeless failed attempt

Bye – a bad net loss

Basket ball game and

A high queue awaits to score


sorry, I had never written a Haiku before and I now realise I wrote a 5.57. and not a 5.7.5

I will try again over the weekend. I shamed the forum
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Re: haiku

Post by tom.d.stiller » Tue Apr 16, 2019 7:42 am

HiQ misses worlds.
future is beyond this spring.
scores never mattered.
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of course scores matter

Post by solongleonard » Wed May 08, 2019 12:48 am

tom.d.stiller wrote:
Tue Apr 16, 2019 7:42 am
HiQ misses worlds.
future is beyond this spring.
scores never mattered.
respect the twenties
surely their parents loved them
hiq up and calm down
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