Like Prey

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Julie Faye
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Like Prey

Post by Julie Faye »

As I look into his eyes
I can't help but notice the green flecks
and I wonder if they have some purpose.
Like moth's wings which freighten predators.
I think of all this as my heart turns and runs,
from those eyes which hunt me down,
like prey
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lizzytysh
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Post by lizzytysh »

Hi Julie,

The beauty and the beguile of eyes. It seems I've looked into those same eyes, yet the flecks were gold :wink: . I enjoyed the way you turned the perceptions around so quickly.

~Elizabeth
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