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Else Vidbjerg
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Post by Else Vidbjerg » Fri Oct 15, 2004 5:24 pm

The day you looked at me
and said please forgive me
I love you
I saw not the list of things
done wrong
but pure love
as we kissed

Only the one
who forgives
is able to attain
the sacred love
of the christ

as it deepens
become christ
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Post by Taigaku » Fri Oct 15, 2004 5:58 pm

Beautiful poem.

Forgiveness is the key - loosening one's grip on the past, allowing it to be just that: past. Then the present shines.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems, Else.

Blessings of peace

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Post by lizzytysh » Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:03 pm

Hi Else ~

Printed ~ and ready for sending. So true how love prevails, or at least can 8) . Thanking you as I welcome you :D . I also look forward to more of your writing.

~ Elizabeth
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Post by Makera » Sat Oct 16, 2004 12:00 am

Yes! Lovely, Else! :D

Amen to that! (Awomen too :wink: )

Love & Light,

~ Makera
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Post by jemima » Sat Oct 16, 2004 11:39 am

"that which is Christ like within us shall be cruxified, it shall die and be buried.but that which is Christ like within us shall rise up, it shall love and create."
your poem reminded me of this.
how come you bother with my heart at all
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