Sex is a sin

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arthur wales
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Sex is a sin

Post by arthur wales » Sat Sep 03, 2011 2:48 pm

Sex is a sin

(A lot of people have a hang up with sex – it’s the most natural and basic instinct common to both humans and animals – yet in the eyes of many and religion it’s a sin – something awful! Yet when we go to war and are about to commit mass murder in the name of some cause – then that’s ok?)

Sex is a sin – as some do say
Greed is good – if it pays your way
Killing is fine – if it’s for oil
Shootin n lootin - on others soil

For Queen and Country
For the Land of the Free
For God and The Cause
For You and me

Friends ..........
If you’re fucking – you aint fighting
Cos if your fighting – then you aint writing

Without writing
There’s no thinking
No loving
No giving

Murder and hate – is killing us all
Greed and envy – starving our soul

Brothers and Sisters .............
If sex is a sin – as some do say
Then in the name of all that’s righteous and holy
Sweet Jesus .......
Hating n killing n stealing aint the way
So give me that wicked gospel of flesh any ole day

Thus endeth the first lesson – of life
Amen
Amen
A-fucking-men
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by fishfishquaileye » Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:40 pm

Arthur done a poem
not very good
hims poetry reads
like maid out of wood
him talk about sex
but nuffink nude to say
cliche about war him
does all day
so I say send Wales to the front
so when him head blast off
he forgets about cunt
Last edited by fishfishquaileye on Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:01 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by arthur wales » Sun Sep 04, 2011 1:20 am

Fishy fish (that's a strange name)
Very witty - all the same
Sorry if my words sound bad
I dwell a lot about the sad
Use your wit to help the cause?
Help put war, hunger, injustice - on pause

Go on fishy- you know you can
Pull up them stockings and be a man
Its getting boring with your crap
I'm sure you're a very talented 'chap'
Write something moving or provoking today
Will he? Won't he? ............ Who can say?
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by fishfishquaileye » Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:03 pm

arthur wales wrote:Fishy fish (that's a strange name)
Very witty - all the same
Sorry if my words sound bad
I dwell a lot about the sad
Use your wit to help the cause?
Help put war, hunger, injustice - on pause

Go on fishy- you know you can
Pull up them stockings and be a man
Its getting boring with your crap
I'm sure you're a very talented 'chap'
Write something moving or provoking today
Will he? Won't he? ............ Who can say?
just cos you fink sad
no excuse your words so bad
take time to learn poemtry
and writing goods
not lavatory
I am woman
so use word "she"
unless you have sum hiddens agender
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by Cate » Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:56 pm

Arthurs name has changed!?

He was Arthur Evens (I only remember because it's a familiar name) but now he's arthur wales?

Is it some kind of oceanic thing ...

all the best,
cate cod
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by arthur wales » Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:39 am

Hi cate

It's more geographic rather than oceanic lol :-)
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by Cate » Mon Sep 05, 2011 2:05 pm

My apologies dear Arthur ... I thought you were showing off for Madam Fish
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by arthur wales » Mon Sep 05, 2011 5:53 pm

Thats ok cate. I am from Wales in the Uk :-)
Fishy is funny isn't he/she?
Can't make up my mind as yet.
I do enjoy a nice bit of friendly banter.
I don't get to stressed about things - I tend to walk away from trivia and they dissolve back into the air behind me :-)
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by Cate » Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:26 am

arthur wales wrote: I do enjoy a nice bit of friendly banter.
you'll like it here then ... it's mostly quiet but sometimes there's some pleasant, or playful banter. There seems to be something special about people who enjoy Leonard Cohen (says the woman who enjoys L.C.). Even our *odd troll is usually somebody who's more interested in entertaining.
Fishy is funny isn't he/she? -
Can't make up my mind as yet.
Yes this fish is funny … there are at least two fishes on the board (or so I think)

Do you mean you can't figure out if she is a she or a he? ... well I've heard of a way to detect this but she might be offended if you were to ask so best to avoid in my opinion.

'He/she' - The English language is bad concerning gender – it always seems to want to force the issue when mostly it shouldn’t be an issue at all. You can say 'they' but then it sounds like a whole group of people, you could type s/he but that just gets weird and still makes the reader think about gender... I suppose you could always say 'the individual to whom I'm referring' but that might throw off some of the poets best love lines.



*please do not call our 'odd troll' - odd as it may hurt they're feelings
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by kwills » Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:26 pm

Ah Jellyeyedfish, I hang on to your every tentacle. You are Cod to me, liver oil to my sole.You take me to a higher Plaice.There,I think I've battered this fish pun to death!
Manchester 19th June/Cardiff 8th Nov
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Re: Sex is a sin

Post by Cate » Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:15 am

kwills wrote: I've battered this fish pun to death!
Hehehe
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