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Lita
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Post by Lita »

Why must I always love the men who sing the blues?

Sad, broke and unavailable yet I still pursue.

Many happy men have danced at my door
But
No
Drama
in
Their
Lives
Makes
Happy
Men
a
Bore
Arno
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Post by Arno »

nice lita, next time you come to Munich you let me know, ok? ;)

take care,

Arno
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Paula
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Post by Paula »

There is a lot of truth in that Lita :lol:
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Post by lizzytysh »

:lol: ~ I've always wondered how [many] men feel that way about women. You've expressed that phenomena very well, with appropriate emphasis using the form you chose to do it.
Natalie
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Post by Natalie »

Lita,

I like your poem. I think it is really cool how the monosyllables create the profile of a man -- a man who has a pot belly and is boring.

I concur with your sentiments. I've dated men who totally have it together and it's like, "yawn."

Whereabouts in BC are you? I live in Victoria.

Great poem!

Natalie :roll:
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