Hi Alsiony never abstain I really enjoy your posts and points of view and I love your poems! :) thanks Kwills, - but I really am going to abstain I think, atleast for now - except to say... that I think a person's own spirituality, and what kind of state it is in - is of far far greater importance ...

kim.mcarthur wrote:So true. So true. Thank God for pumps! Thank you for this poem I have a friend who dearly needed it.
Kim

You know what Kim - that is really lovely. Ofcourse I would have had no idea if you hadn't taken the time to post, so thankyou I am really glad about that.

BestWishes

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Teratogen wrote:How much of my poem have you been studying??????

Oh I see what you mean - no you are more than alright there - I far and away believe that I wrote my poem first
- dim problemau
I posted it in my notes on the 13th, but wrote it a while before that.

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Ooo! Me and direct theological discussion... amongst other things - it could take a while folks - so perhaps I should abstain! hahaha

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Violet wrote:God’s a joker

I’ll stick to the dirt.
The earth.
The trowels.
Sure, there’s an anchor fence
around the lot.
What did you think --
N i r v a n a ?


v i o l e t

Hey V
- I am sure that I am taking this entirely in my own context - but I really liked it a lot

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Well,
sorry if this is selfish of me - but I simply don't care about the Guinness book any more because I am a -

...delicious little strawberry truffle

hehe
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Alsiony wrote: >Nah- that doesn't really work as well does it? i defy anybody to compose a more concise rhyming short verse than mine, alsiony. somebody call guinness!! hehe :) You are right - Namaste Augast has more letters in it - so it is not a worthy contender - however Karrens bye bye July has...

Bonjour
August

Nah- that doesn't really work as well does it? *sigh*

Namaste Augast - ??

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Thanks Mat

Yes - you did read me right

Amongst other things - he speaks in 'his own language', from the point of view of his own journey, and it translates to me on mine. Pretty cool!

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Thanks Cate - I know I have explained a bit of it, I know its not really necessary, in a way I guess. It's up to the person reading it as to what they see, so I don't mean it in a dictatorial sense if I ever do say what I mean - ya know? I sometimes wonder if I go into things too much - but I am an ...

There are many thoughts that I have about Leonard Cohen, And I felt like putting just a few simple words here... A Dedication - As I take me down the rivers The rivers of my mind At times the words I know so well At times - all newness I find And as I take me down my rivers They cross over your writ...

Haha! You have no idea how many times I have done this myself! :) The bin man looks slightly alarmed at the wild haired woman Head high I pull my jacket around me, nod to the neighbor picking up dog poo and walk briskly home leaving my bin on the drive. Pride and dignity do have their rightful place...

Cate wrote: Isn't it funny how sometimes the most obvious things are so hard to see.

Sometimes they are THE hardest things to see haha - I dunno why I am laughing, because it's quite serious in a way - but then - that is usually a good time to try and see the ridiculous side of things too

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Yes – basically that, in terms of the man/woman as presented here. There has always been some kind of Venus/Mars thing (one easy way of putting it) – I think it's impossible to suggest otherwise. But parallels isn't quite the right word because although the two themes here – a relationship between M...

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