George, it is *entirely* to help you with your poetry. Do not be misled by a site where critiques start with thew word *wow*. Why not post to the newsgroup I mentioned as you will be better able to asess how you are really doing. Can't you even see the difference between the draft I prepared fro you...

George, you do not know me. we have never spoken. I am not Partisan. I am really sad at your stubborness.

thats how long I have spent for you writing a draft of a new poem. how long will you spend studying it to learn? Ego aside, George, and LEARN about writing..... no title and just some early draft but it's for yooooooo The Imperfection Detection Vehicle wasted round my gaff Where I reside in splendid...

Laurie, it is a newsgroup called alt.arts.poetry.comments. it is has alot of trolling spoiling it but there are genuine writers there who will seriously crit any new writer.

eeek! that was the worst possible response from you, Georges. How much time did you spend thinking about my view that the allpoetry site is unhelpful as it consists of mediocre writers overpraising other mediocre writers. Have you considered posting your work to the newsgroup I suggested or is there...

I bear you no malice at all and maybe it is better to leave you uninformed, George. But here goes -your award winning poem shows a keen enthusiasm by you but almost no skill at all. The rhymes show all the mechanics of a novice. It is a wholly unexceptional piece of verse. I suggest you post it to a...