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- Fri Sep 20, 2013 2:31 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Darkness Falls
- Replies: 8
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Re: Darkness Falls
Hello Cate (plus any others listening!) it was a very restful experience this time. I spoke to Mark as if he were still alive, well shouted I guess as the Bereavement Counselor advised it was very helpful not to come to terms with his death but to carry on as in married Life (I possibly misheard thi...
- Fri Sep 13, 2013 12:03 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Darkness Falls
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3285
Re: Darkness Falls
oh he was a bit flaky as well - no matter now he is permanently a stiff and dried out, probably mummified (or pickled?) . take care, cate Thank you. I am going to visit Mark's resting place tomorrow and I will tell him I have made a new friend. It wasn't easy to share this poem but you have given m...
- Thu Sep 12, 2013 12:34 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Darkness Falls
- Replies: 8
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Re: Darkness Falls
ohhh, I'm sorry to hear about your loss - what a shame, it's rare in today's fast pace world to find couples who can enjoy a nice simple glass of coconut milk together. It's not a loss as such as they opened a bar nearby that sells coconut shakes and smoothies! I believe Leornard himself once wrote...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 11:29 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Darkness Falls
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3285
Re: Darkness Falls
Thank you very much for the welcome. I actually met my husband, Mark, at a bike factory, over a glass of coconut milk, so this poem is desiccated to him. We were married for over 8 years until that unfortunate day when he was shot dead there. Obviously, the narrative in the poem is not literal as Ma...
- Sun Sep 08, 2013 12:30 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Darkness Falls
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3285
Darkness Falls
Darkness falls no-one in the mourning. It is a mark of respect. Mark works at a bicycle olfactory, where he sniffs out chances to improve his life he listens to whys advice "Why don't you shoot yourself, Mark that will prove them wrong. Why don't you shoot yourself but gently, like the closing ...