Screen so white
it hurts the
eyes, yet he
sits - ensorcelled
by his muse
Keys click and
clack, a smile
erupts - he is
inside his rhyme
The prose is done
his heart sings
because his words
have taken wing
A screen so white
now sits full
of bright new words
and fantasy worlds
he smiles
Search found 4 matches
- Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:58 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: WHITE SCREEN
- Replies: 1
- Views: 427
- Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:42 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Talking Dirty
- Replies: 24
- Views: 3650
Re: Talking Dirty
interesting piece of poetry - naughty, yet tastefully presented and with enough imagery to let someone's (mine) wander through it. Thanks...umm, I mean, shucks..
- Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:39 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: three
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1034
Re: three
The imagery was excellently presented in "The Cause of Snow" - the only thing I found distracting was the rythm. It was an easy read and truly exhibited the feelings winter brings out... I enjoyed the clever play of words Celluid presented, well done! The last poem didn't grab me, but I co...
- Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:31 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Metamorphic Love
- Replies: 1
- Views: 486
Metamorphic Love
Wood so fresh, strong and clean, the lines ripple and bend marking its age, beautiful Teeth strong and sharp, bite, cut deep through its beauty - but no matter, its freshness permeates the air, along with golden wood chips. Wood so fresh, reshaped and painted. Beautiful still, sculpted with love, wo...