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by neanderthalman
Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:58 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: WHITE SCREEN
Replies: 1
Views: 427

WHITE SCREEN

Screen so white
it hurts the
eyes, yet he
sits - ensorcelled
by his muse

Keys click and
clack, a smile
erupts - he is
inside his rhyme

The prose is done
his heart sings
because his words
have taken wing

A screen so white
now sits full
of bright new words
and fantasy worlds
he smiles
by neanderthalman
Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:42 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Talking Dirty
Replies: 24
Views: 3650

Re: Talking Dirty

interesting piece of poetry - naughty, yet tastefully presented and with enough imagery to let someone's (mine) wander through it. Thanks...umm, I mean, shucks.. :oops: :lol:
by neanderthalman
Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:39 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: three
Replies: 5
Views: 1034

Re: three

The imagery was excellently presented in "The Cause of Snow" - the only thing I found distracting was the rythm. It was an easy read and truly exhibited the feelings winter brings out... I enjoyed the clever play of words Celluid presented, well done! The last poem didn't grab me, but I co...
by neanderthalman
Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:31 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Metamorphic Love
Replies: 1
Views: 486

Metamorphic Love

Wood so fresh, strong and clean, the lines ripple and bend marking its age, beautiful Teeth strong and sharp, bite, cut deep through its beauty - but no matter, its freshness permeates the air, along with golden wood chips. Wood so fresh, reshaped and painted. Beautiful still, sculpted with love, wo...

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