Cate
A parting note - if I offended you apologies.
Just count yourself lucky that Michael doesn't pick on your grammar & spelling.
Ciao
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- Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:11 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: .
- Replies: 57
- Views: 8799
- Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:40 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: .
- Replies: 57
- Views: 8799
Re: Dream upon the Mourning light
Well done Michael - true to form, you've driven another person off the site and you used your pseudo-carefree attitude to avoid any kind of discussion. Do Manna and the "other women" (apparently only those who offer cyber-blowjobs qualify) need your misogynistic protection? I very much dou...
- Tue Jan 20, 2009 12:20 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: .
- Replies: 57
- Views: 8799
Re: Dream upon the Mourning light
" I'm pleased you are less defensive than others are on your behalf." Michael, you obviously believe implicitly that people care about and are impressed by what pleases and displeases YOU. We have a word for that in my home country - "guzica." You thrive on dividing people. You a...
- Tue Jan 20, 2009 1:40 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: .
- Replies: 57
- Views: 8799
Re: Dream upon the Mourning light
Michael, I don't know what your definition of a troll is but I doubt I fit it. I use my own name, as I assume do you - that doesn't make me a troll. I know nothing about you beyond the opinions you express here, nor do you know anything of me, beyond mine. " if you applaud writers who can't be ...
- Mon Jan 19, 2009 10:28 pm
- Forum: Other Writers and Writing
- Topic: Goodbye (by Alun Lewis)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3464
Re: Goodbye (by Alun Lewis)
Thank you for the youtube link - it has opened up a whole new world of poetry animation.
- Mon Jan 19, 2009 10:19 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: .
- Replies: 57
- Views: 8799
Re: Dream upon the Mourning light
Mickey one are you also Sideways or do such great minds simply think alike? Seriously, it's wonderful that you put such energy into keeping the poetry forum going, we owe you a debt. "I normally have to coax the goodies out by devoting my time and energy to setting up poetry comps." And yo...
- Mon Jan 12, 2009 2:31 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: passing on a challenge left in my inbox
- Replies: 38
- Views: 4564
Re: passing on a challenge left in my inbox
Cate, we joined the Mile-High Club when "I took you up in my aeroplane, which I flew without any licence", we joined the Mile-Below Club " when I took you down in my submarine which I flew without any wings", but I am never going to invite you to my car until you stop calling me ...
- Tue Dec 16, 2008 2:19 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: my tea poem
- Replies: 20
- Views: 5624
Re: my tea poem
CATE,
a shortened version of your poem -
Tea
he.
a shortened version of your poem -
Tea
he.
- Fri Dec 05, 2008 9:38 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: The Name of the Game
- Replies: 7
- Views: 970
The Name of the Game
Taking Manna's advice, I decided to go back, for inspiration, to a time before the period in which the other pieces are set. I hope I've found a happier voice - it's certainly a different one, younger and adolescent. Summer night city. I am a girl, I have a dream. Kisses of fire, Lovelight. That’s m...
- Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:51 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: To see you
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2890
Re: To see you
Manna, if I've written the same poem, I've written it eight times, not fourteen. You could say the subject is consuming - he left his mark and I hoped the pieces I've written would be elucidatory. I'm sorry if they annoy you. Here's one - inspired with tongue in cheek by your post! :) (See sometimes...
- Thu Dec 04, 2008 1:15 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: To see you
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2890
Re: To see you
Thanks lonndubh, thanks Mat!
- Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:25 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: To see you
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2890
To see you
To see you
was to see the most handsome man on our street
and so well dressed
and such a smile.
You were the
warmth coming back off the summer footpath,
you were my happiness,
you were my love.
And over there
is the field where we made surreptitious love
and behind it
the deep black river.
was to see the most handsome man on our street
and so well dressed
and such a smile.
You were the
warmth coming back off the summer footpath,
you were my happiness,
you were my love.
And over there
is the field where we made surreptitious love
and behind it
the deep black river.
- Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:17 pm
- Forum: Other Writers and Writing
- Topic: Patrick Kavanagh 21/10/1904-30/11/1968
- Replies: 84
- Views: 75953
Re: Patrick Kavanagh 21/10/1904-30/11/1968
I like this very much.
What a wonderful understatement of love.
And what a marvellous opening line.
Thank you.
What a wonderful understatement of love.
And what a marvellous opening line.
Thank you.
- Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:14 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Glimpse
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1124
Re: Glimpse
Thank you.
- Thu Nov 27, 2008 10:42 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Glimpse
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1124
Re: Glimpse
Thank you lonndubh