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What a hell of a revisitation to the Garden by Blake. I like Blake alot. If you speak of
what prompted you to post this particular poem, you may get some more directed
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Hi Pbshel ~
This may be of little concern to you; yet, would you consider using "dastardly" or even "bastardly" man regarding your stepfather. With all of the attendant associations of "niggardly," that word jumps off the page and creates a feeling of discomfort for me.
Thanks, if you can find a different word.
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~ Oscar Wilde
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