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Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2002 4:02 pm
by George.Wright
Thanks for your comments..............it was a gathering of images that flashed into my head. As you can imagine, i don't adhere to conventions but go on emotions and feelings at a moment in time. The language as Guest pointed out is as conventional as cohen's writings.
Georges

Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2002 5:14 pm
by stranger
thanks for pointing it out, guest. I always thought LC was never shy of using the 'fuck' word so what was the fuss about. Anyway, that word has existed in one form or other (verbal, chemical, whatever)since the first jelly -like creatures appeared. A very beautiful word.

Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2002 5:30 pm
by Linda
You can't be serious!

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2017 12:23 am
by solongleonard
oh no!

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2017 2:41 pm
by tom.d.stiller
You in the daylight
Dreamed of summer nights long gone.
Winter surprised you.

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm
by solongleonard
Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night



http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2017 3:58 am
by solongleonard
solongleonard wrote: Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night



http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/

I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2017 9:14 pm
by Karren B
solongleonard wrote: Sat Nov 18, 2017 3:58 am
solongleonard wrote: Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night



http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/

I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.
Image
I hope that's enough applause as my hands are getting tired now!

Should not smoke at night
Unless the sound of the pipe
Whispers your worship

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2017 4:38 am
by solongleonard
Karren B wrote: Sat Nov 18, 2017 9:14 pm
solongleonard wrote: Sat Nov 18, 2017 3:58 am
solongleonard wrote: Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night



http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/

I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.
Image
I hope that's enough applause as my hands are getting tired now!

Should not smoke at night
Unless the sound of the pipe
Whispers your worship

Whispers, Your Worship
Not Guilty, I never scream
Neither fuckng swear

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2017 1:57 pm
by Karren B
Whispers, Your Worship
Not Guilty, I never scream
Neither fuckng swear

Neither fuckng swear
Nor take the oath that binds with
White bands and black silk

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2017 5:35 pm
by solongleonard
White bands and Black silk
Surprising cultural choice
but no colour Bar

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2017 10:00 pm
by Karren B
White bands and Black silk
Surprising cultural choice
but no colour Bar
But no colour Bar
So don bright scarlet robes and
Recline on the bench

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2017 1:43 am
by solongleonard
Recline on the bench
decline park keeper’s offer
and keep off the grass



Thank you for playing, Karren. I remember when poetry flourished here and now the posts either die or are dier.
The fresh faced may not get it and Old Geezers are past it.

here's to the new
who may not get what we do
and the oldies who don't even care

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2017 11:02 am
by tom.d.stiller
Recline on the bench
decline park keeper’s offer
and keep off the grass

and keep off the grass.
the fool in spring dares tread where
angels fear to rush.

Yes, there were times when the bees were busy and the biz was buzzy around here.

Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2017 12:03 pm
by solongleonard
Angels fear to tread
out of pearly Bill Gates then
iCloud windows crash