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by iveta
Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:10 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: My pen dries in the outside world.
Replies: 2
Views: 466

Re: My pen dries in the outside world.

Lady, this was powerful...
by iveta
Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:52 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Emotions
Replies: 2
Views: 367

Re: Emotions

many verbs that sound strong
dynamic and intensive
thank you
by iveta
Wed Apr 28, 2010 8:05 pm
Forum: Other Writers and Writing
Topic: the yellow bowl
Replies: 2
Views: 1385

Re: the yellow bowl

than you....enjoy together, may your loneliness lose its shape :)
by iveta
Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:18 pm
Forum: Other Writers and Writing
Topic: the yellow bowl
Replies: 2
Views: 1385

the yellow bowl

Rachel Contreni Flynn / Illinois/ The Yellow Bowl If light pours like water into the kitchen where I sway with my tired children, if the rug beneath us is woven with tough flowers, and the yellow bowl on the table rests with the sweet heft of fruit, the sun-warmed plums, if my body curves over the b...
by iveta
Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:42 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Woodpile
Replies: 4
Views: 370

Re: Woodpile

both literally and metaphorically, really strong childhood memory
lots of power, like it a lot, thanks
i
by iveta
Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:48 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Tree
Replies: 10
Views: 1568

Re: Tree

Thank you, it was most poignant and attractive, with its strong rhytm and simple words... One almost sensually feels the loss, the fragility of life and living nature. ...reminds me michell's yellow taxi...would make a wonderful song... Good luck with writing great lyrics for great singer one day. i i
by iveta
Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:47 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: a singing orchid
Replies: 3
Views: 370

Re: a singing orchid

oh thanks cate
....and beware of vibrating flowers...
by iveta
Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:36 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: SECRET
Replies: 4
Views: 371

Re: SECRET

yes, it sounds like ancient wisdom.... Most people around here do not read wise books anymore, so we should be grateful for an opportunity to at least get a glimpse of their wisdom via poems or songs... Some guys complain that Leonard copies some ideas of Talmud or Psalms, but I think we should be g...
by iveta
Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:12 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: comfort of an honest friend
Replies: 2
Views: 313

Re: comfort of an honest friend

wise, thank you...I can imagine it as lyrics for Bruce Springsteen....or some sort of peaceful folk song on hardship of life....
by iveta
Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:07 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: SECRET
Replies: 4
Views: 371

Re: SECRET

wise and peaceful....could make a great song lyrics
i
by iveta
Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:05 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: a singing orchid
Replies: 3
Views: 370

a singing orchid

(nothing much of literature....just something for your entertainment and education) “….you know what …..I bought a wonderful orchid yesterday. In the new garden center, Baumax….” my colleague Jane murmered, as she was typing some numbers into her Excel tables. “Must have been wonderful I guess” I u...
by iveta
Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:20 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Leonard on cotton
Replies: 4
Views: 382

Re: Leonard on cotton

....but the eyes are so dramatically cohenish
thanks
il
by iveta
Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:16 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: speechless
Replies: 2
Views: 230

Re: speechless

an incredibly gripping poem, a crushing sense of drama
gives you real feeling of approaching someone dangerously attractive
thanks
i
by iveta
Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:17 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: When we are old
Replies: 3
Views: 224

Re: When we are old

I've really liked the sound effect of the two last stanzas...
hypnosis
by iveta
Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:03 am
Forum: Other Writers and Writing
Topic: cracked bell by Charles Baudelaire
Replies: 5
Views: 2977

Re: cracked bell by Charles Baudelaire

I'm really sorry, my deepest apologies... I've originally known the song in my own language, and then hunt for its English version on the internet. Quite mindlessly, I admit: I forgot to ackowledge the source as well as the translator. Next time I'll add more ethics to such research, I promise... I ...

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